Elevator Pitch #2

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  1. Hi Luke,

    I think your idea is really interesting and it seems like something you are passionate about. I just have a few critiques: For this type of elevator pitch it would be good to put the camera away from you on either a tripod or a table so we can see your hand gestures and it is similar to a real life scenario. Also, you said "um" quite a few times so I sometimes focused on that instead of what you were trying to say. If you practice a couple times what you are going to say before hand this could reduce this. Don't forget to include the "ask" at the end where you ask for more time from the employer or person at hand to listen to what you want to say.

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